the reeteam : website updated... help

Hi,

I have updated my website with a lot of changes :

http://www.thereeteam.com/

Now you can choose the french or english translation.

For the french part, no problems as this is my language... the problem is for the english translation.

I'm not good in english. I tried what I could. I wonder if you can take a look to it, and tell me what changes I should do.

Thank you a lot :)

nice website!

Here's a few suggestions, I stayed close to the original wording.

Welcome to the site of the REETEAM!

We are two brothers passionate about creating video games.

On this site you will find our games (some for free, others to buy) as well as our artwork (drawings, collages, etc)

Our goal is to make original, charismatic games that are fun to play.

Be sure to go to the forum for the latest news or to leave us some comments.

(You should make an english section of your forum once you start getting more english speaking visitors.)

Happy Gaming!

For the disclaimer: All rights reserved. The contents of this website and games created by the REETEAM are owned by the REETEAM and cannot be used without prior authorization from the authors.

(You may want to get a few opinions on the best way to word this, or look into a standard "terms of use" disclaimer)

Hope that helps a bit, if you'd like I could clean up your games descriptions too =)

Thank you Chunkations :-)

trb :
Thank you, I have updated the main page :)

I will make an english section on the forum soon.

Yes, I will really appreciate your help for the games descriptions !