Enemy Head

Hello people :)
I was wondering if anyone could take a look at this model and maybe give me some constructive feedback. I have only just started to get into 3D modelling. With this particular model, i was trying to create an enemy-type of head. If someone could take a look and give me some tips or advice i would be very grateful.


Here is the pic




Thankyou
Goldwing

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My sincere appologies :) I have it fixed now.

Thanks
Goldwing

Hi, this has nothing to do with the enemy head above but, could you also comment on this little bowling scene i have just created.





Cheers
Goldwing

Give the Alien a less falic nose :P

:) Yeah, i thought the nose looked wrong. I'll see if i can fix it :)
Are they any other bits of advice or modelling tips at all?
Thanks Tom for your response :)

Goldwing

Is this his chin or his neck?

I love the bowling scene. I would recomend moving the primary light further away from the camera and up a little. It looks like a camera flash.

You could aslo move your secondary light around futher behind the objects and change its color a little.

Well I like the alien face - it's really ugly but that's a good thing, if you're planning to use it for a ugly alien. With good textures it could look really cool.

About the bowling scene, for some reason it feels a bit unnatural for me. Maybe the proportions, maybe the materials. I'd change the material of the bowling ball first, it looks too much plastic maybe.

Look, I found this photo
[img]http://www.freebowlingtips.com/images/43396_PRETTY%20BOWLING%20BALL.JPG[/img]

hope it helps you understand what I'm trying to say :)
For example the proportions and position of the fingerholes

And well, although it gives me this not-very-realistic feeling, the reflections look very good.

Tom, I don't think his nose looks like a penis. Phallic, is willy shaped.

Vulvic maybe? :)

yeah, how about "labial".

The eyes and head look great. the nose is labial though and
the mouth nocks a few IQ points of of the evil enemy. Full
lips add a degree of warmth and vulnerability to a face.
How about a thin lipped smirk.

Goldwing, I dig the alien the way it is! The labial nose freaks me out....and aliens SHOULD freak me out. :) The bowling scene is nice too. Like one of the previous comments said maybe scooting the light away from the objects a bit might make it look nicer, not as intense. Keep the vagina nose on the alien!!

your alien nose looking like pussy...if there is no secret weapon behind it, change it in to something else :))

Hey it's an alien - maybe it is ! Gives a whole new meaning to the expression f*&%face !

Hehehe :D Yup, its a female alien

I think the word you're looking for is "yonic."

Amazing, I'm gonna wheel that out at parties for sure. I love yonic things.

Yonic???

erm there is somthing odd about the head, I think its the nose.. have I not seen something looking like that some other place ? I just cant place it maby some one else could help me remember lol...

When your girlfriends ass looks the same as her head it's easy to get confused.