My first Anime

Would just like to show case my first anime style picture I drew and inked and coloured.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24011032/

Critique is welcome but please be aware as I said this is my first picture I have done like this

Wow, Agamer, your spelling has improved. :)

As for the pic: it's kinda minimalistic but that's no bad thing. I like it.

Thanks, For both comments :)

I think we will miss the old Agamer-spelling tho..

Good news however is that the site *does* say 'Fist Anime' :P

Maybe the guy's name is Fist. :P

Hmmm, It is honestly:)

Well, It is now:P

lol

Honestly, you should read one of these tutorials, or at least get some inspirations:
http://www.polykarbon.com/tutorials/malehead/3quarter1.htm
http://www.polykarbon.com/tutorials/frontview/frontview.htm
http://elfwood.lysator.liu.se/farp/face_n_head_1/FandH.html
http://www.anticz.com/heads.htm

The human face isn't easy to draw. Even, or especially, as a Manga artist, you should know some basic anatomic details, so the character doesn't look, well, retarded.

Thankyou for the pointers, As I said this is my first one I have ever drawn so I hope you understand it isn't great but I will read the toturials and try again:)

LOL what came up was totally different from what I thought would have come up... Is Fist meant to be First ;)

Nope as I said earlier thats his name, Well it is now:P