Girl: 3d model !!!

Hi all.

This is a 3d model i made in my free times for an idea that i have. (I continue with Century project, of course :-)).

The model has 2700 polys.

[img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/im1.jpg"]

[img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/im2.jpg"]

[img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/im4.jpg"]

Excellent work, especially for such a low poly count.

The skin is superb, I think you need to add more shape to the hips and the outfit is a bit too fitting (around the boobs!)

I think theres an as yet untapped niche for flat-chested female computer game characters!

That aside, really nice work. :)

Very nice model, L_Draven.

I find her breasts a little un-nerving and she seems to have a very pronounced 'lunch box' for a lady but, aside from that, I like it.

Have fun.

Excellent model!! What size of texture map did you use?

mrtricks, I find it amusing you consider her flat-chested. I think you may have your standards skewed by the typical videogame female proportions of Lara Croft.

Quality work

Flat chested? Someone needs to lay off the internet porn and get a reality check.

Stunning O.o

Her top tummies seem to high or else her body seems a tincey bit too long (unless I have seen far too many hanging) - but it is a chuffingly good model - love the crouching/kneeling shot - very professional looking!

Her head seems too small. Makes the rest of her look kind of giant. A Goth Space Angel. Nice modelling work. Impressive.

I was just thinking of making a joke about 'a little head', but you kinda beat me to it. So I won't. :)

You should Mesh Smooth it.

Nice model, although she looks almost verging on manly

awesome textures and work but the head is kinda small maybe add a little to more muscle to her arms to even out the size her torso looks huge compared to the rest...nice rack tho

nice!!! ;-)

Very nice but maybe a bit too 'masculine' - especially in the last shot - Looks like a bloke with boobs !

luv your choice wardrobe...

(very nice model too)

--Mike

Luverly but enlarge the head, lower her breasts and give her a little padding :)

Andy

Her masculine shape might look ok at the side of a muscle man ala wiking warrior or conan type guy. The relative small head might be a style element, just like all anime heads are way too big.

...definately a very nice model and looks efficiently unwrapped!! Great stuff

[URL]http://members.xoom.virgilio.it/france_f/img/leather2.jpg[/URL]

the breasts would look much better without that insane canyon between them :) Is it studded leather or some sort of molded plastic dress?

beautiful model anyways!

Thanks at all for your post and C&C (very useful for me ;-))

I have made several changes:

- I have pronounced more the hips.
- I have made the head a little more big.
- I have put one section more in shoulders.

This is the image:

[img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/cambios.jpg"]

I think you need to go to some lingerie sites for "Research"

much better, but have a look at my link above..

Either that or have a smaller cleavage on the suit ^^

Still looks like a bloke with boobs !!

Looks fine i think. Looks different too. People aren't gonna play your game and stop and think, jesus, this look like a guy with boobs ;)

Lovely model :)

absolut awesome... give her black hair, and she looks nearly like my girlfriend (nearly coz she doesn't wear that cool clothes... :) )

P.s.: AND noooooo my gf isn't a guy with boobs, so shut the **** up! :oP

Its a good model but it could be a great model if it were sexier - i.e. more feminine. At the moment she's rather sexless - sort of a pre-op transexual - no feminine shape to the hips, legs or buttocks and the face is rather hard and masculine - still if thats the character that goes with the game then fine.
A big pair of boobs alone doth not a woman make ! Especially if you've got a big lunchbox !

this is an image from the 3d modelling software

I dont see that it is looked like a boy.

[img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/3d.jpg"]

But it could look much better - compare :




I know its an unfair comparison - but look at the shape of the hips and thighs. You need to inject a bit of this sexiness into your model to make it truly great.

TGreat model.
A little long in the limb, I tend towards that myself, though.

On the breasts: They look like hemisphere's tacked on afterwards. Take a look at it from the top view, perhaps, and curve out the outer chest a little?
Maybe a little less skintight over the breasts, more like cloth?

I love the hair.

Don't listen to them guys thinking that every woman is stereotypical... they come in all shapes and sizes, just as we guys do :)

The girly looks great!

@Ashmantle so true, I think L_Dravin's model is more realistic than the Lara model shown.

I don't see the Lara model as better, all I can say is that it is in a different style, more cartoony and out of proportion to make her 'look' sexy or at least to accentuate her curves.

looks awesome now

cool model.....can i see the wire?

Very cool model - and I can't model worth $&^% but... Check out the lara croft picie posted by smiff - See how the fabric goes between the boobs :P. Make yours like that (or at least add a bit of that), and it'll look much more realistic, unless your going for some wierd molded-suit look.

Hi Folks,

Methinks someone's been watching Underworld.

Later,

Jes

Yes, I have seen underworld several times and is one of my sources ;-).

But i havent wanted make the principal character of the film (Selene), i only want get the film atmosphere like cothes and other ideas, not film characters.

Then, i will put the wire of the model.

like love babe in black i whant here to have my children :)
hmm seems like i have bin sitting in front of my computer to long aaaaaaah

Looks great! A female character who doesn't look like a porn star, that's fresh. This one's got plenty personality, respect! If anything, I think the breasts should be further down; two head-lengths if I remember right.

Thanks all.

Well, i put que wire of the model and 2 images too.

It have 2748 polygons.

The guns: 440 polys each one.

[img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/girlwire.jpg"]

[img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/girl1.jpg"]

[img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/girl2.jpg"]

Me like!

I think you should write some tutorials as every model I see of yours is superb work!!

Even the wireframe view looks amazing =)

OMFG! Alanis Morrisette on the prowl!

Andy

Thanks at all for the comments.

I put a render with MAX (Not screenshot real time XD) for show the idea that i have.

The idea is a mix between Silent Hill, R Evil, S Cell, etc... but all in 3D, not pre-rendered backgrounds like R Evil.

The models and skeleton pose and animation of the pic is the low poly game models (the same models that i will use in the game) :-) .

[img "http://www.eniac.es/usuarios/asier/draven/rnd.jpg"]